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Blank, as it always seems by *Farblade:iconFarblade:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Blank, as it always seems.
The tortured palette, a windless plain.
   The sky shook, aren't you there?
      Have you forgotten what I promised?
Lonliness the color, pale.
Decorate my walls in despondency and solemnty.
Its all gone, or at least all coherency.
   Why do I even stand here?
      I've done the best I can to get you to listen.
Confusion. Boredom. Emotion. Solitude.
There's nobody to come home to.
The aeons seemlessly deny all my pleas.
   Forget this.
      Don't you know how much this hurts me?
         Do you even really care about me?
We don't really want to be alone, do we?
But we always seem to do such damage...
When we forget there is always hope. Always, an angel for us.
©2006-2009 *Farblade
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Author's Comments

Not much for a title it seems. Sometimes its just better to leave them untitled and use the first line.

Havn't written a poem in a while; might explain why such emotions can't be dealt with lately.

Yes, there is basis behind writing this. She knows why.

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~Keyraw Nov 7, 2006, 4:53:37 PM
Thats a raelly nice poem.

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"The victory is nothing.....The fight is everything!
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~Keyraw Nov 7, 2006, 4:54:07 PM
Nice poem!

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"The victory is nothing.....The fight is everything!
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~Keyraw Nov 7, 2006, 4:54:38 PM
Ops sorry Double comment

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"The victory is nothing.....The fight is everything!
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*Farblade Nov 8, 2006, 11:17:51 AM
thanks :)

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"A man's true wealth is the good he does in the world. Beauty is eternity gazing at itself in a mirror. But you are eternity and you are the mirror."

Kahlil Gibran
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Mood: Love ~Keyraw Nov 10, 2006, 5:26:31 PM
welcome

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"The victory is nothing.....The fight is everything!
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~chilledsashel Nov 16, 2006, 11:06:17 PM
Hmmm...I think you use the palette as a metaphor for this relationship, confused yet blank (blankness meaning possibility and hope?), yet the voice of this person carries over as the sky. I think it is very well put together, a really good poem!
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*Farblade Nov 19, 2006, 1:01:24 AM
Thanks man :)

--
"A man's true wealth is the good he does in the world. Beauty is eternity gazing at itself in a mirror. But you are eternity and you are the mirror."

Kahlil Gibran
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~psychosomatosis Jan 3, 2007, 10:43:39 PM
A lot of raw emotion in there. It all just came spilling out eh? There are a couple really eloquent lines interspersed in it...and I think it's really successful :D

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In the end they just gagged me
To make him come out

-The Mars Volta
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*Farblade Jan 4, 2007, 4:24:57 PM
Successful as in, it got people worried since it was very strongly emotional. It didn't get the point across that I thought it would.

Thanks for the comment though.

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"A man's true wealth is the good he does in the world. Beauty is eternity gazing at itself in a mirror. But you are eternity and you are the mirror."

Kahlil Gibran
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